4) Be like Dumbledore -- Withhold your
backstory until the very end:
J.K.
Rowling has said that if you were to put all the multiple drafts of the first
chapter of Philosopher's Stone together, you'd have the whole story from the
very beginning. The fact that she got wise and so judiciously cut out all
that backstory from the start is a huge reason as to why her novels became the
phenomenal success they did.
Donald
Maass, the great literary agent, says "Backstory is called backstory
because it belongs in the back of the story." J.K. Rowling
intuitively aced this lesson.
What
would Harry Potter fandom be without the search for what actually happened in
Godric's Hollow? Who was Snape truly loyal to? And how would Harry defeat the
greatest dark wizard who had ever lived?
All these questions
were dragged out until the end of the series because they all involved
backstory which had been withheld until the reader was dying to know.
Don't
dump it all on your first page, your first chapter. Weave in enough backstory
to keep your reader from getting confused, but then withold it until they are
begging for the knowledge only you can give.
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