We've all encountered this particular plot device before. Perhaps the most famous example would be "Dallas" where they wiped an entire season by making it a dream.
Does it work? In that case, yes, because back then it probably felt a lot more fresh than it does now.
Another famous example? The ending of "Newhart" when Bob Newhart turns on the light at the end of the series finale to be on the set of his previous show "The Bob Newhart Show" with his tv wife from that show.
Does it work? In that case, yes, because it had a huge payoff for his devoted fans and sent the silly show out with a bang.
A more recent example is one of those cheesy, made-for-TV holiday movies. This particular one featured an MC who claimed to have the perfect life save for the perfect man. When she falls on her way to work and is rescued by prince charming, the perfect man, things start to spiral. All the while she is with the perfect man she is falling for the truly perfect man she works with.
But then the catch comes. When she falls again later, she wakes up in teh hospital to be told she's been there unconscious for two days.
Yes, two days. Which means the bulk of the movie was fake.
All that character development, all the little things between the OTP (one true pairing) that lead to love, all the best writing of the movie, never happened.
Does it work? In this case, no. None of that's real. Yes, it's a movie, but the point of it is that the changes she underwent were all created in her head.
Dreams can work. So can dream sequences. Dreams can really help us get inside our MC's heads and show the reader how the events of the book are impacting the MC in ways they don't quite realize.
I once wrote a book where the MC has two lives, separate and under different names. She meets two different men in one life, both of whom she ends up dating, and has a friend in her other life who is in love with her. After a trip to Hawaii she dreams she's back on the beach. Each boy shows up in succession in the dream and the weather and atmosphere around them changes each time, growing stormier and stormier. Dreams can highlight what the subconscious is doing to process events and even the feelings and emotions the character is ignoring or not even seeing.
What do you think? Can you think of dream sequences or dreams in books that work? Ones that don't work?
Stephanie McGee
I'm a ninja writer, lover of horses, dogs, and otters. Really, I'd own an otter if it were legal. In lieu of that, I've settled for a Zuni fetish of an otter, which represents joy. I love science fiction and fantasy, but don't ask me to write the former. I don't really care about the technical aspects. I just like a good story.
My writings are mostly YA fantasy. I'm inspired and informed by J.R.R. Tolkien, Tamora Pierce, David Eddings, the Brothers Grimm, and Hans Christian Andersen.